I think that what you composed made a ton of sense. But, what about this? what if you were to create a awesome headline? I ain't saying your information is not good, however suppose you added a title that makes people want more? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda boring. You ought to glance at Yahoo's home page and note how they create news headlines to get people interested. You might add a video or a pic or two to get people interested about what you've written. Just my opinion, it would make your posts a little bit more interesting.
